Forgotten Canyon

Rated 4.83/5 based on 7 reviews
The thought of finding Montezuma’s hidden treasure urges cartographer Johnathon Scribner deep into the Forgotten Canyon. Why he stays there, however, is a different reason altogether.
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About Lois D. Brown

Lois received her bachelor’s degree in journalism and worked as a news correspondent in Washington, D.C. She later completed a Master’s degree in communications and started her own freelance business.

She has written nearly fifty articles and books, many of which are about nutrition and the use of natural food supplements. She worked as the chief editor to a former New York Times best-selling author Dr. Neil Solomon, and she co-wrote a book on time management with former Miss America Sharlene Wells Hawkes.

In 2004 she published a book with psychologist Victoria Anderson catered to Mormons about how to better manage stress and anxiety. She has presented material from this book to large audiences across Utah.

Recently she has turned her interests to writing fiction after realizing the bedtime stories she tells her four children never put them to sleep.

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Reviews

Review by: Larry Berkman on April 27, 2012 :
This was a good short story. The author was very descriptive, and she captured the scene and surroundings perfectly. The story made me feel like I was actually in the jungle with these characters.

Aside from a few punctuation and spelling errors, my biggest critique is that the story doesn't seem all that original. Jonathan is a wealthy, uptight know-it-all who belittles Riley, the expert guide, through the entire story. When their differences reach a boiling point, the story progresses exactly as one would expect it to. I did like the petroglyph reveal, that was clever. However, the ending was too predictable.

Overall this author certainly has talent, especially with her details and setting, and if she continues to write and add depth to her twists and mysteries, she'll be great.
(review of free book)

Review by: Shanna Beaman on Aug. 07, 2011 :
Loved the characters! Two very different personalities are portrayed in this fun short story. This is a fun read and an excellent short story that keeps your attention.
(review of free book)

Review by: Linda Watters on July 19, 2011 :
Please refer to review I wrote 10 minutes ago!
(reviewed long after purchase)

Review by: Linda Watters on July 19, 2011 : (no rating)
I read this twice, as I missed the relationship between Riley and Jonathan first time. Now a have a little youtube in my brain of the characters that makes the story real. I have Jeff Bridges as Riley and James Franco ( "134 Hours") movie, as Jonathan. I am in favor of a sequel. Let's bring Jonathan back with both arms and have him find that treasure. I love the stories of the Southwest and hidden treasures. I loved this story.
(reviewed long after purchase)

Review by: Eldon Decker on May 07, 2011 :
Great ebook. It's nice to fill spare moments with a great story like this one.
(reviewed long after purchase)

Review by: Mac Arnold on May 07, 2011 :
I must say, I like the whole treasure hunting theme with this authors shorts. I'm hooked.
(review of free book)

Review by: Jennifer Jenkins on Feb. 16, 2011 :
Forgotten Canyon is a clever short with characters that jumped right out of the page. Prepare for pleasant shot of adventure with just enough humor and unpredictability to make for great quick read. Buy this one for sure!
(reviewed within a month of purchase)

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