The Vampire Across the Hall-2. The Murmuring Lift

Rated 3.33/5 based on 6 reviews
Daisi Malone lives in the Presidio Building in Newtown, Sydney, Australia. She shares the building with a variety of strange people,including the Vampire across the hall, and a murmuring lift.

This is the second story in The Vampire Across the Hall series.
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Words: 3,470
Language: English
ISBN: 9781458086426
About Daisi Malone

My name is Daisi Malone. My first story, the Vampire across the hall was published under the name of a friend, Leann Richards. My second, The Murmuring Lift will be published soon.

I live in Sydney Australia

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Reviews

Review by: Robert C. Mason on June 02, 2012 :
Original, if not odd
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Review by: Julia Averbeck on Aug. 30, 2011 :
I liked the first a bit more but it was a nice read.
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Review by: RJ Palmer on Aug. 24, 2011 :
Overall: Although I believe this mad an excellant addition to the first in this series, I do not think that it went to the heights it could have. Other than that I think this could become a great series.

Point of View: Just as before you are in the mind of Daisi, seeing things from her viewpoint. I think this makes the story a bit more personal and draws a little more of the reader in.

Voice: This is clearly not a strongpoint for the author as the writing seems a bit timid. But clearly the author has been working on this aspect of their craft.

Character Development: The author has done a wonderful job of bringing the main character back for a seconf story and I look forward to more of Daisi's path in life.

Plot: One word. Flawless

Dialogue: Again not an apparent strong point in the author's armory but the dialogue more or less came through.

Pacing: This is a rather short story so the pace does not really affect one way or the other. It is a light and entertaining read.

Setting: Daisi (haha Author's name is the same as the main character) made a world that seems to be that apartment building right down the block. This could be the life of someone right under your nose. So yess the setting was perfection.

Continuity: Naming the character and the author as one in the same gives this an autobiography feel to it. A nice touch to add to the story.
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Review by: butterflieslovebooks on May 10, 2011 :
Just like book 1, this book also made me smile and couldn't wait to start book 3.
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Review by: thylogale on Feb. 25, 2011 :
Another interesting story, with some nice moments. I like the way this series is shaping up.
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Review by: Jackie B on Feb. 18, 2011 :
Easily read in a few minutes... Has some cliched humor but as a short story it was interesting enough and if there will be more I would like to learn what happens to Daisi next....
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