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Rated 4.40/5 based on 5 reviews
Callie's obsessions of the wild west had driven her to run away from home as a teenager. After she leaves her husband Jonathan with their five year old boy she reaches her destination but life isn't what she had anticipated in the west and when Jonathan come looking for her she has to make a decision to rectify her mistakes.
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Words: 14,870
Language: English
About MaryJane Seeiso

I would like to thank my readers for the wonderful reviews on my work. It is really encouraging and I promise to improve and give it my best the next time...

About me

I am South African and a Zulu by nationality. I am an aspiring writer and I am passionate about writing. Christian fiction is my genre. I write English as my second language and I really appreciate the reviews to my work as it helps me to develop as a writer. Criticism is welcome but I would also like to hear encouraging words(hahaha!)

Check out my blog for more stories. maryjaneseeiso.blogspot.com

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Reviews

Review by: chicklips on March 18, 2014 :
Liked what I read. Thank you for making it available.
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Review by: Mary Clyde on Feb. 08, 2014 :
Another Seeiso book with strong characters and a lot of feeling. I never review a book on spelling errors etc as they can be corrected and don't have anything to do with the story or main body of the book.
After saying that, I would love to see a full novel from this author. Definitely a lot of talent here. :)))
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Review by: Linda Arditto on Dec. 12, 2013 :
I don't know if my review will mean anything to those reading it but I believe this to be a fine piece of work.
I don't agree with Naren & Eveline Evans, I thought the characters and scenes were described enough and left the rest to your imagination. This made it very enjoyable for me to read. If you're going to comment on grammar, make sure your own grammar is correct when doing so.
Keep up the good work MaryJane.
I look forward to more.
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED.
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Review by: John Spencer on Dec. 07, 2013 :
Very good story. I liked it. Yes a few grammar and spelling errors but the beauty of an ebook is you can fix it and upload again.
Great work.
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Review by: Narlen & Eveline Evans on Dec. 06, 2013 :
It has the makings of a good book. Lots corrections needed to grammar and spelling. I can only suggest that the author read it out loud to herself so she will catch the mistakes, or have someone edit it for her. Needs more character development and scene description to round out the story.
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