The Bully

Rated 4.33/5 based on 3 reviews
Back before the days when Richard Remington became a world-class time traveling historian, he was a teenager in high school. As such he was subject to the same problems and situations any youngster is apt to find himself in. Jake Tabor was his nemeses. Jake Tabor was also the school bully who had no qualms about making Richard’s life miserable whenever possible. But all things have limits. More

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Words: 8,700
Language: English
ISBN: 9781310220005
About Allen J. Gerzoff

About the author
Allen J. Gerzoff has spent most of his life in the southern Arizona desert where he is now retired from a career in mechanical engineering. The loves of his life are his wife, his children, his grandchildren and his cameras, not always in that order. In retirement, he has achieved some recognition as a landscape and wildlife photographer. Historelic -The First Journal was his first science fiction novel and the first installment of several to come in the not too distant future. Two others of the series are now available here on Smashwords along with several short stories on assorted subjects. There will be more!

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Review by: Sahara Foley on Dec. 09, 2013 :
I liked the story. Yes, there were some errors, but they did not detract from the plot. Bullying is such a big issue. I was on the wrong side of it in 6th grade, and know how demeaning it can be. Unfortunately, most of us don't get a chance to kick-ass back at them. Thank you, Allen.

PS. I also didn't see any numbers. I have no idea what David Keith was talking about. I agree with Kevin Fontain.
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Review by: Kevin Fontain on Dec. 08, 2013 :
I don't agree with David H. Keith. I think the 'H' stands for hateful. I didn't find any numbers when I read it so what's he talking about? I think it was just self promotion which shouldn't be allowed.
All the author has to do is change the 'inserts' to paragraph numbers, no big deal, didn't take away from the story.
I enjoyed it very much and will be reading more from this author as I have just discovered him. :)
RECOMMENDED.
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Review by: David H. Keith on Dec. 07, 2013 :
Lose the line numbers. They are distracting, unnecessary, and amateur. This is a short fiction story - not a legal paper.

Frankly, I didn't finish this book - I simply got tired of trying to overcome those line numbers. That's too bad, too, because I found the story's premise intriguing, if a wee bit Walter Mittyish - hey, everyone would like to go back and teach the school bully a lesson, right?

There were some technical errors, as well, but they were relatively minor and nothing a competent editor can't root out and correct.

I hope Gerzoff gets rid of those line numbers - they were the fingernails on the blackboard to me.

Still, it's a cool idea, the premise of it. For that reason, I give this three stars.

David H. Keith
www.novemberfirstpubications.weebly.com
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