HEY GUYS I AM A BY OF 13 YEARS OLD AND I AM INTERETED IN WRITING STORIES AND PLAYING CRICKET. MY BOOKS ARE - THE KIDS LAZY DIARY AND THE CHAMELION. ONE IS FUNY THE OTHER ONE IS MYSTERY.
HOPE YOU ENJOY THEM BOTH!
on March 02, 2014 :
1. Proofread and edit your introduction. If it is not attractive, there is no point in looking at the book.
2. Your story concept is interesting, but the work needs more polishing.
(review of free book)