The Time Stone

Rated 3.00/5 based on 2 reviews
A group of unlikely heroes from the opposite sides of the track embarks on the most ultimate human adventure surrounding an ancient alien transportation device. More
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Price: Free! USD
Words: 135,310
Language: English
ISBN: 9781311449580
Tags: time travel
About Jeffrey Estrella

I have been writing since I was eleven years old. I write fictional stories, plays, poems, and novels. I won an honorable mention in a young playwright contest and had a poem published in an anthology. The Time Stone, my first novel and breakthrough novel, is published on www.lulu.com in print and on www.smashwords.com in electronic book format. I envision this to be the first novel in a series.

If you take the time to read my novel, I thank you and invite you to contact me at estrella.jeffrey@gmail.com to discuss your feedback. I offer it as an electronic book for free via Smashwords because I want feedback to make it better and see if my novel has what it takes to develop a strong fan base that will be indicative of its future commercial success.

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Review by: Koby Skelton on Sep. 02, 2014 : (no rating)
Unfortunately, after what hints at a great storyline, this book suffers from severe grammatical errors. While I enjoyed the initial setup, I just could not continue further than chapter 5, due to the obvious screaming need for quality editing. If today's authors cannot even see the problem in singular/plural phrasing, or changing gender of a character mid-sentence while they are writing, why should an intelligent reader be asking for insults to that intelligence?
Please, submit this to a massive re-edit!
(review of free book)

Review by: John Wells on May 26, 2014 :
While the story is definitely a 5 star story, the grammar and run-on sentences makes it hard to read sometimes. I totally enjoyed the story and highly suggest a massive edit session.
(review of free book)

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