God-Kissed: Book 1 (The Apprentices)

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When one of the godly take special note of you, you become God-Kissed, an unstoppable force despite the odds, or at least one likely to survive them. The mages have their God-Kissed protector, who can slash arrows in flight and seems to fear nothing, but is that enough! More
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Fiction » Fantasy » Epic
Words: 207,550
Language: English
ISBN: 9781311007964

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Review by: Joy Pinnell on Sep. 17, 2014 :
I really enjoyed the storyline once I got into it. But the lack of editing is a serious problem. Spelling, careless errors, and lack of chapters becomes extremely annoying. I would not pay for this in this condition. Nor would I buy another from this author unless it was edited by some one who knows how to.
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Review by: crpgnut on April 29, 2014 :
The Good: It's free

The Bad: The English is broken, completely.

I tried to read this but gave up eventually. It has a bunch of grammar, spelling, and tense errors and is too distracting after a while. Also, the story takes absolutely forever to get going and is pretty dull. I didn't care about any of the characters at all after 100 pages or more. It could become good if the author becomes more proficient in English. I believe it might be a second language for him.
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