Everyone's A Critic

Rated 4.00/5 based on 5 reviews
A man meets a woman on an elevator. Turns out she may be his biggest downfall.
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Price: Free! USD

Words: 1,750
Language: English
Tags: writing horror
About Bryan Wolford

Horror writer from Illinois. Editor on the DARK anthology series.

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Review by: gotmud on Aug. 29, 2011 :
this was a ok book i would read more from this author. keep the good work up.
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Review by: Heather Wielding on April 19, 2011 : (no rating)
I'd like to introduce you to a friend of mine. He's called "comma". I suggest you get to know him, well and thoroughly.

The story in itself was, in a way, every writers' dream: get everything you wish for by just typing it. Ah, the bliss. But the execution lacked both finesse and charm. As a casual reader I wasn't drawn in, and as a girl, I found the writer a touch appalling.

I sensed no life. No charm. And the title... well.
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Review by: DIANE MARTIN on March 28, 2011 :
Great story with a great twist! I really enjoyed reading this one. You have a talent for keeping your readers interested and I hope that you will continue to keep writing.
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Review by: Tim Eagle on March 04, 2011 :
Pretty good story. A familiar ring and similarity to Bentley Little's, Dispatch. Keep writing, keep polishing, and keep up the work. It's appreciated. I concur with Terry Callister about the formatting, the Smashwords writing guideline is very simple to follow, I've done it to three short stories albeit grudgingly. I'm also an author and hope that my stuff is converted good. I followed all the rules but still don't know how they have turned out. The best advice I can give any writer is to KEEP WRITING, you only get better the more you do it. Thanks for the free read!
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Review by: Terry Callister on Feb. 27, 2011 :
This is a good little story, worth reading but let down a bit by poor formatting which makes it difficult to read hence only four stars. Take a look at the formatting guide Bryan and do yourself a favour.
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