Jennifer's Secrete

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Rated 2.00/5 based on 2 reviews
Jennifer is A very successful writer. She writes, she teaches, and she...Jennifer has a secrete and if you want to know what it is, you only need step inside the pages of this adults only book by Marisol More. More
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Review by: Ernest Winchester on June 01, 2014 :
This story needs a serious rewrite or an editor’s touch. Too many sentences began with a noun or pronoun. And I wonder if the author really meant to say ‘Secrete’ instead of secret in the title. But then again, Jennifer did squirt a lot so maybe…? Quite a number of typos and misspellings throughout as well.
The plot wasn’t so bad, but I’d like to see a better ending.
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Review by: Brad Stuff X on June 01, 2014 :
Bad grammar destroys the mediocre writing.
"as they peaked above the dress..."
"to test her knew plot tonight, she..."
"she'd right down every moment."
Even the title is off. I expected to read about powerful secretions...
Marisol, take some English courses, or fire your proof reader.
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