The Vampires Mistress - Vamp Romance

Adult
Rated 2.44/5 based on 9 reviews
Lord Ramos, ruler of the Red Night clan sends one of his most trusted dark warriors on a task to find him a mistress. Not just any mistress, a virgin human. He must not fail. Complications arise filling this story with betrayal, twisted plots, warlocks, deals with warlords, highlanders and more!
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Words: 15,960
Language: English
ISBN: 9781452381121
About Marion Francis

I am a short story and novella writer. All my stories are original fiction.

My characters are derived from my readers character requests, people watching, worldwide business travel, vacation, magazines, and pure imagination.

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Review by: wanda flanagan on Dec. 22, 2011 :
not my kind of book but it may be yours
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Review by: Adina Stevens on Dec. 18, 2011 :
Very disappointing read. All through the book I was wondering if it was written by a teenager as the structure of the writing was so poor. Upon reaching the last chapter of the book, I was extremely disappointed as there was no last chapter. The book just ends in the middle with no indication of a sequel.
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Review by: Amy Dobek on Dec. 17, 2011 :
One of the worst-written "books" I've ever attempted to read. Chock full of awful grammatical and punctuational errors, mixed tenses, and a truly horrid mix of modern colloquial vulgarities and overly formal archaic syntax. This would never get second look from a professional publisher. I'm sorry to give it even one star.
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Review by: Michelle Sutcliffe on June 27, 2011 :
Where is the ending? You dont get to find out how it ends. It was a good read up until then.
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Review by: Danielle Lumley on May 18, 2011 :
Unfortunately I would compare this to a poor first draft. It has promise, but there are lots of errors and little if no description in the story. It is almost all dialogue and the characters are under developed. One of the most important things to do in a book is to get the reader interested in the main characters, but it is so impersonal I had no idea who the main characters were supposed to be by page 20, so stopped reading. A lot of important things were glossed over and as a reader that is beyond frustrating (Like how one of them took her virginity while she was unconsious.)
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Review by: Ravensong Blackpanther on Dec. 11, 2010 :
I downloaded this book at Barnes and Nobels. I was very disappointed. I really liked the story and then it just ended with no finish. Its like a preview, but I can't find the rest of the book!!!!!
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Review by: extasymaria on Nov. 02, 2010 :
good ebook
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Review by: Lesa Labbauf on Oct. 26, 2010 :
I downloaded this book from Barnes & Nobles and was very disappointed. There were many errors in gramar, spelling and sequencing. It seemed as if two sections of a larger book were stuck together. The characters were not fleshed out aand popped up or named as needed. The idea or basic story has promise but has a long way to go to be good reading.
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Review by: kayleigh jay on May 24, 2010 :
i like vampire books good story like the danger in vampire romance
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