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on Sep. 03, 2012 :
If this was anything but the usual masculine sadism fantasy, I would give it five stars. The writing is quite good, and the erotic tension between Carol and Mark is palpable. However, Carol's all-too-quick submission to Mark's humiliations after her first-day reluctance is rather unbelievable. The fantasy elements of the story are also in no way served by Mark's use of A-t-M to punish Carol the first time in the dungeon.
Quite a bit right, but fatally flawed...
(reviewed long after purchase)
on April 12, 2011 :
Great story... It kept me wanting till the end. Very well done weaving the submission with the rest of her growth. Oh damn hot too!
(reviewed the day of purchase)