I write New Adult novels, which I describe as YA for grown-ups. Its all the swoon of YA but with a little more naughty. I also write paranormal romance. I love creepy heroes with snarky heroines.
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on May 08, 2011 :
This was my first book/story on Smashwords. It was...predictable. The dialogue was unnatural for the time period. The main character sounds like a current day teenager, set in 500 AD. The relationship with Tara needs to develope naturally. The journey to love IS the purpose of the story. First he needs to despise her, then he can protect her, but not immediately fall in love on page 3.
(review of free book)