I'm a reluctant suburbanite who loves to tell stories. I'm not fond of lying, but I'm getting pretty good at it. I've written some books. I am Twisted Jim.
on April 26, 2011 :
I enjoyed reading this short story. The suspense throughout the story was steady building to the end. I was engrossed in the plot and satisfied with the ending. Each line and every word was expertly placed and in the correct order. Perfect juxtaposition. You have great talent Mr.Dayton. Well done.
(review of free book)