Surprise

Adult
Rated 3.00/5 based on 6 reviews
Daddy's got a surprise planned for His babygirl and she can hardly wait to find out what it is. Take a peek as this couple explores a new dynamic of Daddy/girl role play. More
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Fiction » Erotica » BDSM
Words: 1,330
Language: English
ISBN: 9781458119711
About Nicely Naughty Girl

Nicely Naughty Girl is a nice girl with a naughty side or maybe it's the other way around. You be the judge. She enjoys Daddy/girl role play and embraces her naughty side (as long as Daddy says it's ok).

Reviews

Review by: Belle FleurSF on Oct. 16, 2011 :
While a good thought for a story, the execution leaves very much to be desired. The author, Nicely Naughty Girl, would benefit from having a better editor. An editor would have brought out more emotion in the writing. Although a novella/short story, she failed to capture the true emotions of what a Daddy's Girl feels while waiting for her Daddy. It felt superficial, almost like what one should feel, instead of it coming from Daddy's Girl's heart.

The story felt forced and inorganic. Maybe she will fare better with her next story, but I won't be paying for it if it's anything like this.

I can't quite describe it, but overall this story hasn't resonated with me as other stories of this genres have.
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Review by: Pj clarke on Oct. 05, 2011 : (no rating)
This is a good place to start if you are new to reading role play and BDSM
Very tame in the subject matter and a totally good romp
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Review by: Sadey Quinn on Sep. 16, 2011 :
Surprise is a fun short story!

It's mild and the ageplay isn't so edgy. Most people who are familiar with BDSM erotica wouldn't find this offensive at all. Rather, they'd find it entertaining and fun.

I look forward to more releases from this author. :)

Writing is great, the length is short. 4.5 from me.
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Review by: chickrocking on Aug. 16, 2011 :
Nice little short story

Age play story (keep in mind while reading)

Not a story for those who are uncomfortable with age play and other kinks

Mild erotica/Mild BDSM

Erotica could have been more descriptive since it is labeled as an erotic story

You feel like you came in somewhere in the middle of a story.

A more in-depth beginning and ending would make it more enjoyable

More description of the characters and their relationship would have helped the reader to get to know them better

Would be wonderful if the story was longer

Ending could have been a tad better. I think erotica should have a clear, to the point ending, even if more stories based off these characters

With the way the story ended it does leave it open for a possible longer stories based on the characters relationship

A small taste of the author's style of writing
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Review by: William Ross on April 30, 2011 : (no rating)
Nice a great little story.
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Review by: Ernest Winchester on April 30, 2011 :
A short, mildly erotic tale, that is a relief when the author stresses this story is only role playing.
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