Pinochle Anyone?

By Ernest Winchester
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(3.67 based on 6 reviews)

Published: April 29, 2011
Words: 830 (approximate)
Language: English
ISBN: 9781458128058


Short description

It’s just a harmless little card game among consenting adults.

Extended description

Pinochle is no good with a card missing. So are they willing to switch to another card game with a little more titillation?

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adult card game a quiet evening at home among good friends

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Review by: Blue Sleighty on March 13, 2012 : star
I am not surprised one bit by the "quality" of this story. It is exactly what I expected from this author. Boring and poorly written.
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Review by: B. Handy on Jan. 11, 2012 : star star star
I frequent a writing group every week and we make it a point to edit, revise, and review each others work as all three are invaluable to any writer. This is what I noticed:
“Sam took a sip of his drink and wiped the acquired condensation from his cold glass on his pant leg before opening the box to withdraw the deck.”
This seemed a bit wordy for such a minor detail. Even just removing acquired may have kept this from leaping out at me or if just to omit a ‘his’, “wiped the glasses’ condensation on his pant leg”.
“as it was his custom to allow the cards to ‘hatch.’”
I’m not a card player so this term sent me into a Google search (which yielded no results oddly enough). Perhaps state what’s happening and then add the term? This bit threw me off track considerably.
“I agree, not that I intend to loose.” Lose as in the opposite of win, loose as in the opposite of tight.
“And I’ll close the blinds. (Missing a closing quotation mark here).
Good story with some minor details that could use tweaking. The use of hatch was what really took me out of the story, mainly because it’s a term I could not figure out with a quick Google search. Otherwise, nothing too major and a clear enough picture was formed in my head while reading.
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Review by: Kristina Howells on June 20, 2011 : star star star star star
A lovely story, I really liked the way it ends. It makes you use your imagination in what happens next.
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Review by: Wendy Scott on June 12, 2011 : star star star star star
So, being one card short of a deck isn't so bad after all.
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Review by: Maureen Mullis on May 20, 2011 : star star star
Interesting story. I could believe this is based on a group that actually exists outside of Mr. Winchester's imagination.
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Review by: Elaine Shuel on May 01, 2011 : star star star star star
You're quite the teaser, Ernie. I can't wait to read the next part to this story. Great beginning.
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