Jason Halstead works by day as an IT Manager, developer, and database administrator. In his spare time Jason enjoys spending time with his wife and two children, writing, and competitive powerlifting.
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on April 30, 2012 :
Not bad. Story concept and plot well done, but grammar could use improvement as well as idiomatic usage which tends to be hokey. E. G. use of "manly", in my opinion, should have been left out, or if the author insisted on an adjective, then an improvement at least would have been "masculine".
Story ending suggests author may yet write a sequel and I would be curious to see how he gets father and daughter out of their respective pickles.
(review of free book)