Oliver's Painting

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A story about love, anger, and art. Oliver loves the painting he purchased...but loves it too much.
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Published: June 15, 2011
Words: 1,830
Language: English
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Review by: Lotta Bangs on March 30, 2012 : star star
You have a talent, convey atmosphere and emotion well, but OMG you need to learn layout: how to set out writing, to paragraph. Don’t guess at spelling; look it up: h'oderves => hors d’oeuvres. Read as much good literature as you can to improve your vocabulary and word usage, and pay attention. Read a book the first time for enjoyment and again to analyse how the author does things. Try some how-to-write books—libraries have them—and learn to edit. Also I doubt this is erotica.
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Review by: Ernest Winchester on June 15, 2011 : star star
I’m not sure about this other than to say it could have used a closer edit. I’ve seen worse but I’ve seen better.
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