The First Sacrifice

Rated 4.00/5 based on 2 reviews
Artorius of Cairbrunn hates being dead.

In life, he was a hero, protector to emperors and scourge of the barbarians. Now, hundreds of years later, he's been summoned back to the mortal world -- and telling hero from villain is not as simple as he once thought.

A fantasy short story about right, wrong, fallen kingdoms, rising upstarts, love, loss, and what we'll do for those we care about. More

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Fiction » Fantasy » Epic
Words: 8,010
Language: English
ISBN: 9781466146433
About Peter Sahui

Peter Sahui loves to explore worlds of wonder, whether they be found in the pages of history, in the present and future of our world, or in the interactive realm of a good game. His science fiction and fantasy writing brings together these influences and more. Visit his homepage at http://www.petersahui.com.

Reviews

Review by: Sift Book Reviews on Jan. 26, 2012 :
The First Sacrifice is a wonderfully written short story brimming with enough conspiracy and action to easily fill a full length fantasy novel. 4 stars out of 5

Overall, it is a solid story with good writing and a compelling fantasy plot. It has an exiled King, enchanted weapons, spirits, murder, revenge, and a great voice. My only real problem with the story is that it lacks an adequate build up of suspense—and given the dire events taking place, this problem could be easily remedied with some extra plot/character development and foreshadowing. The elements of suspense are there, I simply felt that I didn’t know the characters well enough to be invested in what side won or lost. I realize this is a difficult feat to accomplish given the shortness of the piece, however a greater sense of immediacy would turn this good story into a great story.

The First Sacrifice has a solid, intriguing ending worthy of a fantasy book. The writing shows great Fantasy potential and I would be excited to read more from this author, especially a full length novel.

Erica of Sift Book Reviews received a free copy for review from the author. This has, in no way, affected the reviewer's opinion.
(reviewed long after purchase)

Review by: Wagner Sahui on July 28, 2011 :
Very punchy short story. Gripping & suspense. Wish there is an extension to the story.

Highly recommended reading.
(reviewed within a month of purchase)

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