My name is Rachelle Williams, and I am a freelance web content producer with a penchant for writing short stories and flash fiction with a macabre twist.
My other interests include photography (I shoot with a Cannon EOS 60D, wanna party?), classic films, nutritional healing, Generation X culture, and creating passive income on the Internet.
***Fairly Odd Quirks***
-- I have been trying to become a vegetarian for the past 5 years, but chicken and ribs keep thwarting my mission!
-- I am learning how to master the trick of utilizing the gifts of Adult ADHD - Inattentive Type, but it's just so hard to focus...
on Sep. 17, 2011 :
Rachelle Williams has a nice beginning to a longer work in "Letting Go". It could stand some polishing, though. For a narrative so short, it's way too non-linear: there are scene-breaks literally nearly every paragraph or so. In addition, the narrator explains, rather than shows, what is or was happening. Lastly, the use of present tense is pretty jarring. It would read better past tense. But a good story IS brewing here--it's just not done yet.
(review of free book)