Committed: A Short Story

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Robert loves Layla more than anything, although she never returned his feelings. When she commits suicide, the tragedy is all that the teen can think about. Robert is convinced that Layla's previous boyfriend was the reason for her death, and is determined to punish him. A short but moving tale of unrequited love, revenge, and a commitment that lasts beyond the grave.
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Words: 4,230
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301913763

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Review by: Melissa Wolff on Aug. 21, 2011 : (no rating)
So I read you're short story and I really, really liked it. I thought it was really well written and you got into the Robert character pretty well. The only thing I think I would have liked is if you had explained more about how Layla committed suicide. If Robert was so obsessed with his friend's suicide I would think that he would think about how exactly she did it. I know I did that when a friend of mine committed suicide.

Other than that I thought it was a great short story and you are a very talented writer.
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