Black Tie

Rated 5.00/5 based on 2 reviews
Trapped in the desert you must unravel the mystery of the obelisk. Follow a man into a strange and secretive world as he fights to survive and to solve the puzzle of his own imprisonment.
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Price: Free! USD
Words: 21,370
Language: English
ISBN: 9781465981813
About Kris Shamloo

I do a little bit of writing. If you have a minute, please leave a review.

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kris@krisshamloo.com

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Review by: April H on Oct. 24, 2011 :
Wow wow wow! This piece was a breath of fresh air. No drama, not too much suspense, and definently a psychological twist to it. This is a must-read in which every person interested in the 'meaning of life' or those such things will be thorougly satisfied. Mr. Shamloo, keep up with this interesting 'series'! You are very talented for such a young age!
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Review by: A.D.Duling on Oct. 16, 2011 :
I was directed to this book by promotion of the author. As tis is not my normal Genre of reading, I took a chance and am happy I did.

From the beginning you are pulled into the mind of the character in his quest to figure out where he is and how to get out. I could really connect with the character, a man, nameless to the end and perfectly fine. He is definately a determined individual and it pays off. The description and imagaination of the author is amazing! Creativity, genius!

Minor gramical errors(like I have room to speak) but over all the flow of the writing and story was great. I am also wondering if there will be a sequel? I actually do hope because I am left wanting to hear more. What happens after that...ok no more because I will ruin it for future readers.

Well Mr. Shamoo, I am you first reviewer and should not be the last, I very much enjoyed your story(read it in one sitting, so good!) and look foward to more(hint, hint). You have a talent, your writing is very descriptive and your imagination is very impressive! Keep writing and very, very impressive...22? Very impressive!

4 stars for grammer(hey mine would probably be three, so don't let me damper you:0)
5 stars for story line
5 stars on connection with character(s)

Can't think of anything else(can u tell I am not a professional) my overall rating...well duh 5 STARS!

I recommend this read and good luck author...AD
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