on Sep. 30, 2012 :
So fantastic but still hot.
(review of free book)
on Oct. 29, 2011 :
This story read like a very good hardcore porn movie. Totally unrealistic, but who cares? The author was hot and the action was hot. I savoured every scene.
(reviewed within a month of purchase)
on Oct. 20, 2011 :
The first person present tense narrative is definitely a very successful experiment. This is an extremely arousing story. One thing I love about these stories is that they have the feel of a fantasy in which the teller gets so turned on by the possibilities of a situation that the story goes temporarily out the window to make way for outrageously unbelievable but deliciously raunchy sex scenes. This might seem to be a criticism, but it isn't. Stories can be predictable, but when you put yourself into the hands of Zaria von Mars you never know where you will be taken, except that you will never leave the erotic wonderland of her imagination.
(reviewed the day of purchase)