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The Black War

Part one


By Anthony Youssef


In the year 92,762, the inventions were far more advanced than today. For example, people could go to different galaxies, which is way farther than just the moon. So anyway, people knew the sun was getting dimmer and dimmer each year. They started selling tickets for the ship that was about to leave looking for a new energy source. Its name was the avenger. But not everyone was able to flee to the stars. The innocent people left behind were to dwell in eternal darkness. They would either would freeze to death or die from hunger. But those people lucky enough to get on the ship would venture the stars for another 5 years in the avenger. But then they would find I new home with 7 suns and call it Snapler. Now the year is 101,000. Humans have been her awhile. Everyone thought there were no problems, until the Flear came.

In these years a few people went missing. No one really noticed because everyone thought it was normal with the new planet. Except it was really the Flear. The Flear were here first and they were not happy with the earthlings coming. So they began the black war. The humans were attacked with an ambush. In their defense the people fought back but the Flear knew the land better than the humans. So they used this to their advantage and the hid behind weird rock. They were also immune to the planets gases, which the humans were not. The humans had to wear gas masks to live. So during this war a baby was born. His name was mark. Mark was taught to hate the Flear. His parents were in the war against the Flear. But then both his parents were killed in combat. So mark swore that he would have revenge on the nasty beats called Flear. Mark soon joined the army. The war was still very much alive.

In the helicopter [which had no propellers but still flew faster] to battle was mark, ti, his friend, and jax, his other friend. It was their first time to battle. “Yo jax, what do you think their gona look like?” said mark.

I don’t reckon I know. Their probably vicious and ugly.”

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