Felt like the book read fast, but lasted forever. Neither of the main characters felt developed. The chapters always ended like that was the end of the book. No real conflict, however basic concept was good.
I almost didn't read it because of the erotic side of things but went and read it anyways based on the reviews. This book and the other short stories were very surprising. I can't wait for the sequel!! For others that are teetering, read it anyways!!
on Sep. 14, 2013
It was magical and a good read with few grammatical errors, but not enough to deter the reader. I give it 5 stars and a recommendation to read, and read it you must!!
This book has some of the worst grammar. There is a difference in your and you're, milady and malady, definitely and defiantly... the list goes on. Please, Please, Please find someone to proofread your book. Once the distraction of mistakes is mended the book would be an easy 5 star read!