Well done Mark,I really enjoyed that. It has got a nice fast pace so is not boring to read. You also go through quite a bit of emotions as you have no idea what is going to happen next. I think you are on the right track.
Don't Cry If You Don't Try
on Sep. 22, 2011
That is all I needed to encourage me. I have a few seeds to water myself. Thank you Mark and may God bless you to go on with the talent He has given you. Regards Lily