Location: United States
Member Since: Aug. 08, 2010
BethBV
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- Puppy Dog Tales
on Aug. 28, 2010
Three short stories for young children written in rather simple language and chock full of errors. The stories were not terribly interesting and rather uninspiring. All of the stories need some serious editing. Throughout the book the word "tail" (as in the thing hanging off the rear end of the dog) was spelled "tale". In the last story the wife's name suddenly changed from "Laura" to "Sarah". There were many obvious grammatical errors as well. My 10-year-old noticed all of these errors which became quite distracting but did give us some good laughs! That's the only humor we found, though.