Smokin' hot fantasy. Would like to be fully human but part cat? Marred, as so many ar, by bad proofing (grammar, spelling.
Celeste, "alright" is not a word, it is always "all right".
"already" is a word, meaning done, history.
"all ready" means everyone prepared.
Also, I think that other word is spelled "douche".
Poor Brittany! one little misadventure with Beauregard, and she's on on a fast slide dowwn, into -- everything.
Raunchy and explicit; a great read (if you like it over the top)! Very well written. Get the sequel at the same time.
Bad grammar destroys the mediocre writing.
"as they peaked above the dress..."
"to test her knew plot tonight, she..."
"she'd right down every moment."
Even the title is off. I expected to read about powerful secretions...
Marisol, take some English courses, or fire your proof reader.
Romantic and sexy. I loved it.
Confused, though -- is this written for men or for women?
-- Women are getting most of the orgasms, but protagonist is male.
Warning: Male protagonist builds a "harem" - might offend some.
Just awful. Erotic, but the really bad writing and bad grammar makes it too difficult to read. Additionally, the use of language is childish -- "shitter" is not an erotic name for that part of the anatomy. Any plot that exists is ruined by internal timing conflicts and other faults. I added this author to my "never read again" list.
Other than that, ...
Great Read, and very HOT. characters have personality, actions make sense, and situations are "realistic enough".
Really good writing style, and not full of the errors caused by sloppy proofing.
I'm going back for more by this author -- probably a lot more.
A totally frustrating read.
Primary, the formatting of the text is really awful, either because this is the author's first try, or is it the publisher's fault.
Second, author's knowledge of anatomy (human or other) is lacking.
Last, the author uses words that make no sense in context, and are not close enough to a word that makes sense for it to be a spell-check mismatch.
Prior book by this publisher was good. Publisher needs to be more concerned with its own reputation.