Very enjoyable story, hot sex scenes but good character development also. I've liked all of this author's work that I've read so far, will read anything else she publishes. Just a few minor typos here and there, not enough to be distracting.
An interesting story idea but it needs some work. The changes in tense (past vs. present, sometimes within the same sentence) are quite distracting and take away from the content. Also, the story lacks the buildup/anticipation needed to really draw the reader in but that may just be my personal preference. Overall it comes across as choppy.