Hannah's Choice
on Nov. 29, 2013
Well written, but mediocre story (more of a scene or early chapter of a book) about a doctor stimulating a female patient during a physical exam.
Brianna
on Dec. 02, 2013
Enjoyable story, but nothing groundbreaking.
Daddy's Little Model (Daddy Erotica)
on Aug. 24, 2014
Very confused narration (first person, but occasionally seems to slip to 3rd)...could probably have been a good story with better editing.
The Grind
on Aug. 29, 2014
Very good writing, but I found the story and characters fell flat
Memoirs of a Bitch
on Sep. 01, 2014
Very interesting story, well written, but development felt a little confused...I'm hoping it clears up in the other novels.
In The Moment
on Jan. 31, 2015
Generally well written and well told story with a few minor issues. First, the French language does not have the letter "á", only "à " or "â", but "Román" might not be meant as a French name. Second, if parts of the dialogue is to be written in French, it should be edited by a fluent, if not native, French speaker (the recurring idiom should be "n'est-ce pas", not "n'est pas"). Beyond the editing issues with French, there were a few (very few considering the length) other sections that could have used more thorough editing. Overall, however, very well done.
Daddy
on Feb. 01, 2015
Very powerful for such a short read!
Working Together
on Feb. 02, 2015
Hot read, but odd writing style in my opinion.
Just Friends
on Feb. 04, 2015
Very short, well written, good erotica.
Car Trouble
on Feb. 11, 2015
Well written, good erotic scenes, nothing spectacular
Desire And Fate Prequel
on Feb. 16, 2015
I did not enjoy this story. I felt both Hanna and Ozonar were impossible to relate to and that the writing was clunky at best.
Heart And Soul
on Feb. 19, 2015
Very well written and engaging characters.
Sin's First Flicker
on March 31, 2015
Hot and well told, but could have used a little more editing (homophone confusions and certain places where the word didn't exactly fit).
The Best of Friends
on April 28, 2015
Good story with hot scenes. Well done.
My Lesbian Lawyer
on April 28, 2015
A hot scene, but nothing special here
Dutifully Bound
on May 18, 2015
Name confusion (Shannon becomes Keisha), odd uses of punctuation and some head hopping make this a story that does flow particularly well.
Kinky Mom: The Substitute
on June 01, 2015
Needs serious editing...in the first 15% of the story, there were several glaring mistakes. Despite that, an entertaining read.
Contradictions
on June 04, 2015
Good story, well written.
Ardent Shorts Volume One
on June 08, 2015
The writing was far from polished...needing some very thorough editing...
His Nemesis
on June 10, 2015
Well written, despite a few mistakes. Well told, but not my style.
Living the Illusion
on June 12, 2015
Well written (albeit with a few passages that need more editing) and highly intriguing story, but the author seems overly fond of capitals, instant messaging acronyms and initialisms, and adding multiple exclamation marks to emphasize a point.
Uncovered
on June 18, 2015
Well written, but nothing special.
Sensual Moments
on June 18, 2015
Could use some more editing.
Taming Dana
on June 19, 2015
Well written, but nothing special.
Taken
on July 07, 2015
Good and well written romance.
The Attic Door
on July 07, 2015
Good story and good twist. Comment: it's "foreword", not "forward", when referring to a short piece of writing before a text.