The Trail of Whitehorse
on Aug. 03, 2012
Interesting story, but the author's notes (e.g., "insert this here") and the random capital letters in the middle of sentences made it a little difficult to enjoy. The author's notes summarizing future scenes make it seem unfinished.
A Mechanical Man
on Aug. 03, 2012
Delightful story. The writing quality is incredible. I absolutely loved it. :)