Edward E. Rochon

Biography

At 63 years of age, making a go at writing still appeals to me, though going on my third year in eBooks with $27 in receipts dims the appeal. But then, I write for my health and the health of the world. Often the cure rivals the disease in grief and aches. My writing career started at twelve when I attempted to write a sequel to Huckleberry Finn but never finished it. My writings have included poetry, plays, a novel, non-fiction and writing newsletters for here and there. Apart from newsletters, nothing has been published in print. I bought an audio recording of one of my poems but threw it away in disgust due to an inappropriate reading by the narrator. 'Contra Pantheism...' was my first eBook. Several dozen eBook essays have been published since along with a few books of verse, and collected into five volumes of collected essays and one volume of collected poems. A few other types of literature are on my list of published works. My essays deal with fundamental questions of philosophy as well as natural philosophy (science.) On the whole, my works are as far above the writings of Plato and Aristotle as the material power of the United States is over that of Ancient Greece. I once asked myself if I had ever written anything memorable, but couldn't remember exactly what I had written. I started to check my manuscripts but stopped as it seemed the answer to the question was obvious. Gore Vidal mentioned in one of his memoirs that writers tend to forget what they write and are a bad source to ask about their works. Gore knew a lot of writers. I have not and may have been a bit hard on myself. Apart from self-improvement and maybe making a few bucks, my main goal is to bring about a golden age for mankind. Being a man, this sounds appealing. It is pointless to desist and all small measures are worth the effort. Albert Camus thought suicide the only serious philosophical question. He was a fool and died young. Suicide is a waste of time. The most important functional question is: How do I get what I want? The one question that trumps this is the ultimate question of intent: What should I want? As Goethe pointed out: Be careful what you wish for in your youth, you might get it in middle age.

Smashwords Interview

Who are your favorite authors?
Hermann Hesse has a musical quality to his writings in German. Surprisingly, anglophone translators do a pretty good job translating Hesse (English speakers are notoriously bad translators. Great anglophone authors are generally not scholars. Samuel Beckett is a notable exception, but then 'Waiting for Godot' could have been written by any semi-literate.) George Eliot had a fluid style. Blake, Tennyson, T. S. Eliot, Yeats, Robert Frost, Coleridge, Poe and Matthew Arnold wrote some poems I like.
What authors influence your work?
I need an editor not authors. If I like something in the work of another author, it is only because that is the way that I would do it. Writers tend to have a lower opinion of the great writers than the public at large. I am no exception to this dictum. The idea of a co-author does appeal to me sometimes. I definitely prefer she to he, sexually attractive than not, loyal friend to disloyal rival. It has long been my opinion that the truly great books will ultimately come from male/female co-ed writing. Shakespeare, Racine and that crowd will fade into the background along with Homer, Virgil, Dickens, Poe and the rest.
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Books

Tornado Buster: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 2,730. Language: English. Published: April 18, 2015. Category: Nonfiction » Engineering, trades, and technology » Aeronautics & Astronautics
Prevent tornadoes by discharging electric energy into the earth via flying lightning rods. Build heavy lift high torque engine, slow moving planes to do so. Large propellers, big air foil area, extended landing gear and discharge cables.
Suicide Tonight
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Price: $4.95 USD. Words: 3,600. Language: English. Published: March 24, 2015. Category: Fiction » Humor & comedy » Parody
What if modern stand-up comedy resulted in suicide of audience members? Courtroom drama with Jackie Mason, Steve Martin, Amy Poehler & Tina Fey, Dick Cavett, Chelsea Handler, Eddie Murphy, Michael J. Fox, Rodney Dangerfield before the docket.
Woman: A Play Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 1,840. Language: English. Published: March 19, 2015. Category: Essay » Literature
A dissertation of sorts on W. B. Yeats' assertion that Solomon became wise by listening to his many wives, some personal matters of the author, and what comedy and tragedy portend for marriage.
Pneumatic Horse Saddle
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Price: Free! Words: 1,770. Language: English. Published: March 18, 2015. Category: Nonfiction » Sports & outdoor recreation » Equestrian
Horse saddle and pneumatic bike shocks combined for a new type of saddle. A basic description of the idea laid out.
Totalitarianism: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 1,550. Language: English. Published: March 17, 2015. Category: Essay » Political
Seven principles that offer impediments to the machinations of totalitarianism are laid out with a description of the seven items and why they offer a bulwark against the threat. It is hoped some good comes from laying out the principles in series for reader inspection. Tyranny is still a constant potential threat.
Golden Age Essays V
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You set the price! Words: 41,450. Language: English. Published: March 3, 2015. Category: Nonfiction » Philosophy » Essays
17 new essays in my Golden Age Essays series covering topics from theology, aeronautics, physics, economics, literature, politics and history.
Jubilee Moon
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Price: Free! Words: 5,760. Language: English. Published: March 1, 2015. Category: Nonfiction » Religion and Spirituality » Biblical Commentary / General
Comments on numbers 11, 50, 52 and others. An attempt to reconcile lunar and solar calendars within a cosmic framework of numbers and human nature. Illuminati and religious aspects of time and numbers discussed.
British Israelism: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 3,970. Language: English. Published: February 19, 2015. Category: Nonfiction » Religion and Spirituality » Biblical Studies / Prophecy
British Israelism disputed. Latin nations are the inheritors of Joseph and Israel, rather than Celts and Germans. Comments on Bible, justice and end times, and recapitulation of theories from previous essays.
Green Gold: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 1,950. Language: English. Published: February 16, 2015. Category: Essay » Business
Ensure confidence in money through green gold, greenbacks with gold thread sewed into them to the value of the denomination, one dollar of thread to each dollar bill. Offers ways to maintain currency security and prevent destruction of currency for gold content.
Rome, Jews & the West: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 4,830. Language: English. Published: February 11, 2015. Category: Nonfiction » Religion and Spirituality » Biblical Studies / History & Culture
Rome, Jews & the West united by apostate practices of Jews. More the: Protocols of the Elders of Samaria than Zion. Shows how Celtic/Teutonic paganism and Rome united with Judaism to subvert Christianity and the millennial age.
Joy of Life in Verse
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Price: Free! Words: 1,050. Language: English. Published: February 10, 2015. Category: Fiction » Poetry » Themes & motifs
A poem about the joy of life and impediments to its acquisition. There is a brief preface with some commentary and explanatory notes.
Drama Free Verse
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Price: Free! Words: 1,170. Language: English. Published: February 8, 2015. Category: Fiction » Poetry » Themes & motifs
An attempt at drama free verse, largely failed. Four poems with commentary comprise the work: Harmonica, Sans Harmonica Wonder, Buried Harmonica, and Lilacs.
Compound Interest: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 1,830. Language: English. Published: February 8, 2015. Category: Essay » Business
Compound interest not conducive to economic growth and harmony in society. Proposes banks charge simple interest on loans, and be allowed to invest in entrepreneurial partnerships to supplement profits. This produces absolute wealth, more assets for society rather than redistribution.
Peach Power: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 2,310. Language: English. Published: February 5, 2015. Category: Essay » Sociology
(4.00)
Color of white race is set straight. It is peach. Racism discussed and critiqued. Peach Power proclaimed as road to world peace. The format is satirical which is supposed to be humorous. This is debatable.
First Sin & Culture: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 4,620. Language: English. Published: February 4, 2015. Category: Essay » Political
A discourse on original sin, its origins, detractors and supporting evidence. Its effect on Germany in the past is noted. Nationalism and original sin go together, so both must go along with Whore Babylon one world nationalism. Man as man before God and the universe!
City of Light: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 3,450. Language: English. Published: February 3, 2015. Category: Essay » Technology
Build a three cable communications system into all user sites with a broadcast backup securing cell phones and broadcast media on an emergency basis. Build an Interstate Fiber Optic Highway to secure full employment and prosperity for America. Post-industrial age regeneration after Reagan and Obama's deleterious effects on U.S. power.
Mobile Loran: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 2,330. Language: English. Published: January 31, 2015. Category: Nonfiction » Engineering, trades, and technology » Remote Sensing & Geographic Information Systems
A justification for Mobile Loran (mobile transmitter) for military and crisis operations. A brief survey of the technology, dead reckoning and security features laid out.
Jobmasters: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 2,850. Language: English. Published: January 30, 2015. Category: Essay » Business
Jobmasters match up resources, production capacity and the unemployed to keep society fully employed. I discuss competition and cooperation in economics, and note that organization is more important than labor in productivity, though labor is the spark to light the fire of wealth generation.
Peter Pederast: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 1,500. Language: English. Published: January 25, 2015. Category: Essay » Literature
A brief look at Peter Pan from the perspective of veiled pederasty. The title and other terms and nuances suggest pederast plays on words and fantasy.
Truth & Faith: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 3,420. Language: English. Published: January 24, 2015. Category: Nonfiction » Religion and Spirituality » Faith
Truth and faith discussed in relationship to God's goodness or lack of goodness. What truth is is spelled out. Justification for faith and counter arguments noted. The case of Job studied. How Satan and God interact is discussed.
Guns & Salvation: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 2,920. Language: English. Published: January 20, 2015. Category: Nonfiction » Politics and Current Affairs » US Constitution
Essay suggests attack on gun ownership be parried by expanding the militia to its original notion of a nation in arms to defend itself. Controlled at the local level, no totalitarian draft army of the North Korea kind is intended.
General Advice: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 4,010. Language: English. Published: January 19, 2015. Category: Nonfiction » History » Military
Eight general principles of war from an armchair general. The play on words on general is deliberate.
Evil Orwell: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 2,510. Language: English. Published: January 3, 2015. Category: Essay » Literature
George Orwell seen as abettor of totalitarian rule, not its enemy. His character is called into question under analysis of his novel: Nineteen-Eighty-Four.
Biblical Riddles: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 2,830. Language: English. Published: December 28, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Religion and Spirituality » Biblical Criticism & Interpretation / General
I propose that God does indeed tempt men, contrary to the assertion in The Epistle of James. I surmise that the Last Judgment will never happen due to analysis of scripture. This is the only way to reconcile Jesus not knowing the day and the Father knowing it in contrast, both being God.
Pollution Soup Cook: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 1,340. Language: English. Published: December 25, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Science and Nature » Chemistry / Computational & Molecular Modeling
We make reservoir soups of pollutants that interact to break down or bind pollutants. The water is filled and surrounded with appropriate flora and (perhaps) fauna to suck up toxins into their bodies. All plants and animals will be harvested for burning or storage.
Pentameter Evil
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Price: Free! Words: 2,190. Language: English. Published: December 22, 2014. Category: Fiction » Poetry » Spiritual
A poem and supplement on the nature of evil and lust, their causation and manifestation in that man of sin of Revelation. King Solomon appears to be the archetype of that man of sin. Some explanatory notes and a silly second poem of frustrated passion is included.
Waterworks: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 1,540. Language: English. Published: December 18, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Science and Nature » Ecology and Environment
The proposal suggests that upstream pumping of excess water runoff can solve water shortages, reduce the need for dams, and balance industrial and ecological concerns. River runoff energy supplies much of the power.
Dirigiplane: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 1,100. Language: English. Published: December 9, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Engineering, trades, and technology » Aeronautics & Astronautics
An airship airplane hybrid design that transforms in flight by deflation/inflation. A target speed of 300 knots (320 for brief periods) and the typical airship cruise speed of 85 knots for maximum velocity is the goal. It is a compromise between speed and lift.
Space as Infinity II: An Essay (Double Space)
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Price: Free! Words: 1,370. Language: English. Published: December 4, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Science and Nature » Physics
Space has two natures, one finite and one infinite. Finite space is the space of matter (mass.) Infinite space is co-existent with this finite space. Infinite space is not subject to analysis by math. Finite space passes through infinity in a sense.
Golden Age Essays IV
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You set the price! Words: 51,450. Language: English. Published: November 27, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Philosophy » Essays
The 4th book in my essay collections. These are more strident, political and controversial. The goal is to improve the life of the world. Some opposition should be expected. Lust eats at many hearts. Rather than self-interest, enlightened or not, selfish desire overwhelms them.
Modern Judiciary: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 1,290. Language: English. Published: November 23, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Law » Courts and trial practice
An end to improvisation in court. No question or answer allowed before the jury, without prior review by the judge, prosecutor and defense. An end to courtroom shenanigans. If the power of God to the judge, then the omniscience of God to the judge to the extent possible.
Biblical Exegesis & Fraud: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 3,060. Language: English. Published: November 22, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Religion and Spirituality » Biblical Commentary / General
Modern biblical scholarship condemned as devoid of proof. The epistles of Peter and the work of Isaiah shown to be consistent with likely historical development during the times of authorship. Speculation is not proof. Faith cannot yield to speculation in fairness to faith.
Atheism & Fraud: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 15,230. Language: English. Published: November 7, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Science and Nature » Evolution
A refutation of Extant Dodo Productions: Top 25 Creationist Fallacies, a puff piece for Darwinism with a strong atheist undercurrent. The video uses clips of creationists: Kent Hovind, Kirk Cameron, Ray Comfort, Michael Behe, John Pendleton, Lee Strobel, and others. The opinions are mine and not those cited in the video. No contact with those criticized was made by the author.
Pyramid of Ed
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Price: Free! Words: 1,580. Language: English. Published: October 22, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Religion and Spirituality » Biblical Commentary / General
Pyramid of Ed (Witness) is a covenant monument reminiscent of the altar described in Joshua 22:31-34, but not an altar as the Altar of Ed was not a true altar at any rate. A covenant between America and God is offered.
The New Vauban: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 4,190. Language: English. Published: October 18, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » History » War
Mobile towers suggested for defense over trenches in conventional warfare. Interchangeable body armor and shields through piecework parts. Mole machines, earthquake warfare and deep citadels reviewed and opined upon. Basics of fortification is discussed.
Plan RD: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 7,940. Language: English. Published: October 15, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » History » War
A war plan integrated into an economic viability shift to the hunter/gatherer aspect of human society. We sabotage alliances against us through raiding and destruction of assets overseas.
SNL Reformation
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Price: $4.95 USD. Words: 4,880. Language: English. Published: October 9, 2014. Category: Fiction » Humor & comedy » Parody
Ascerbic look at Saturday Night Live offers some suggestions for the future of the show. Superheros and franchising options are laid out.
The Beatles: Table Talk
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Price: $4.95 USD. Words: 2,330. Language: English. Published: September 25, 2014. Category: Plays » European / English, Irish, Scottish, Welsh
Two biographical sketches of the Beatles culled from who knows where. Why Paul is the cute Beatle and whether Ringo is a double O agent comprise the main themes.
Cosmic Despair: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 1,530. Language: English. Published: September 2, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Philosophy » Essays
A reflection on despair and its coloring of existence. Views and options on resolving misery spelled out. Nirvana, City of God and suicide outlines considered in a collage with doubts and contradictions highlighted. The conclusion is that despair is pointless and constipating to mind and body.
American Theodicy: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 1,840. Language: English. Published: August 28, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Religion and Spirituality » Ethics
(3.00)
Theodicy is justification of evil in the world reconciled to divine power. The essay takes issue with common assumptions and offers a true reconciliation of God's power with freedom of conscience and desire.
Brain Damage: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 2,250. Language: English. Published: August 22, 2014. Category: Essay » Author profile
An essay listing brain trauma to the author and lessons drawn from them.
Logic: An Essay
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You set the price! Words: 3,890. Language: English. Published: August 18, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Philosophy » Logic
A new approach to logic breaks thinking down to definition of states united by relationships and processed through the transience of time. Some background material on universals, axioms of existence, time and perception are dealt with. An essay on logic reduces to an essay on linguistics.
Divine Irony: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 8,460. Language: English. Published: July 31, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Religion and Spirituality » Essays
Divine irony shown through biblical citations. The premise accepts that God can be ironic and that this is plain if not manifestly glaring in the scriptures. Irony is not always obvious but can be discerned by context and logic.
Adam's Earth
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Price: Free! Words: 2,050. Language: English. Published: July 24, 2014. Category: Fiction » Poetry » Themes & motifs
Seven poems encompassing the theme of Adam and his fall from Eden. Poems are for believer and non-believer alike.
Golden Age Essays III
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You set the price! Words: 40,460. Language: English. Published: July 4, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Engineering, trades, and technology » General
My third collection of essays covering diverse subjects: science & technology, economics, health & biology, ecology and theology. The title indicates a desire to bring man to a golden age, the desire of all sensible men throughout history. A little of this, a little of that to arrive there.
Monetary Stability: An Essay
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Price: Free! Words: 2,720. Language: English. Published: June 27, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Business & Economics » Money & monetary policy
Save America from economic dislocation by guaranteeing the value of money. Fear mongers must be silenced. Justice must prevail. A buck is a buck or should be.
Inquisition of Christ
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You set the price! Words: 1,270. Language: English. Published: June 23, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Religion and Spirituality » Biblical Commentary / New Testament
A brief dialogue between God and man places Jesus on the spot for the state of the world. It calls him to account, using his own words recorded in the Gospels and scripture.
Collected Poems I
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You set the price! Words: 15,490. Language: English. Published: June 21, 2014. Category: Fiction » Poetry » Themes & motifs
A collection of poems consisting of four books and extracted verse from other prose works. Sleep, sex, celebrities, good and evil, and philosophical problems are covered.
Inexpensive Subs: An Essay
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You set the price! Words: 2,710. Language: English. Published: June 16, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Transportation » Ocean transport
A cubic design to make submarines cheaper to build. Some thoughts on construction, safety and uses proposed. This is basically a cargo submarine but with aircraft carrier potential.
The Second Coming: An Essay
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You set the price! Words: 7,890. Language: English. Published: June 10, 2014. Category: Nonfiction » Religion and Spirituality » Biblical Studies / Prophecy
Description of situation leading up to the second coming of Christ. Speculation on development of history since Christ. Interpretation of Revelation and biblical prophecy revealed.
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Smashwords book reviews by Edward E. Rochon

  • WALKING INTO MURDER - Book One of the Laura Morland Mystery series on Nov. 22, 2013
    (no rating)
    This book meets all the criteria of criticisms lodged at the Miss Marple, Jessica (Murder She Wrote), etc. gang of serendipitous (sic) sleuths forever running into dead bodies. Improbability stretches the suspension of disbelief to the breaking point. We all know why Holmes, police detectives and non-consulting private eyes run into dead bodies. Isn't it obvious that Marple, Jessica and Laura are killing these people off (doubtless with accomplices) to satisfy a sort of Munchhausen syndrome where the nurse poisons her patients in order to heal them - in this case to knock them off permanently. Add to the fact that I knew this author in the past and seeing the many points of similarity between Morland and Lambert (some frankly admitted by the author), Lambert is clearly the murderess of all the corpses. It is chilling to realize that you dined with a murderess at some point in the past. Out of fear, I am tempted to give this the full four stars rating, but a sense of duty compels me to part with a mere two stars rating. Lambert should be encouraged to find a more plausible way to run into corpses. Peeking ahead to her other two novels, I suggest she either hook up with Thomas for business or put out a consulting detective shingle for four, five, etc. in the series. At least Thomas' business brings him into danger and potential murderers. TWO STARS: **
  • Rotation of the Suns on June 30, 2014

    Rotations of the Suns Review: I picked the shortest of the author's works (and free.) I am poor and impatient. Her profile notes her inclination to sentiment over thought in verse. If this is the case, meter and beauty of the language is paramount. The verse is deficient in these. Being feel tone imagery and collage, it is vague. Is it lesbian breakup or her artistic inspiration abandoning her? Or was her lover her muse? Maybe she doesn't care. I would like a hint as to which of the 3 messages is published. Lots of astronomy conveys loneliness quite well. The distance of the heavenly bodies with the hint of burning fire of love works well. But the flow of the language lacks beauty so necessary to a feel tone poem. The verse of signing her wrist with blood caught my attention towards the end of the poem. Sounds like suicide attempt in verse. I once slit my wrists without success and that may be the whole of the attraction. In general the 3 key things in most cases with poetry if you want to be read are: short poem, lyrical meter and memorable idiom. The whole book is one poem, too long for a poem lacking good flow. I tend towards the didactic with beauty as a heuristic device. So I am not a target reader for the author. If she plays music or sings, try composing your verse with some catchy background melody. If you did do this, I don't think I liked your music. Does she sing her music on YouTube? Maybe trying it would help her write better, the embarrassment.
  • Slip Slop Slap on July 26, 2014

    Nice poem! I'm 62 but I liked it too. You might consider editing: Be sure those seagull aren’t to near. They’ll snatch the food their hungry too! Maybe "those seagulls aren't too near."; "They'll snatch the food; they're hungry too!" I hope you are not one of those poets that resents editing advice. Anyway, the meaning is clear enough and the edits no big deal. English orthography sucks, but there is the kids to think of.
  • High Tech on a Stick; or, Luddite with WiFi on Aug. 30, 2014

    I have been thinking of moving out to the sticks to extend my semi-retirement income more cheaply. I actually walked around the high desert once myself. I also saw Sam Shepard's 'True West' on stage, a former Mojave boy. Sand Dancer's review below is something to think about for the future, who gave you a one star review. //////On a personal note: I write since you are the first to review my work 'American Theodicy...'. I wanted to respond but you have no comment option on your website. The law of physics you talk about are largely delusion. Cause and effect does not exist as a natural phenomena. We see relationships repeated and make assumptions. Most modern physics is pseudo-scientific crap. A transcendent God revealed to you will do nothing for you but leave you in ignorance or blow your mind away. We're too stupid too take in divine wisdom and power. So we take it in bits and pieces. Nature is filled with evidence of God. Justice is an important matter to unravel. But thanks for your review. Have you looked at my book on the 'The JU Engine'? If you tinker, you might be able to see if it works, and then sneer at me for conceiving it if it doesn't. It has 100% sample.
  • Dreams of the Last Days: Where are all the Stars? on Feb. 09, 2015

    Air Force plus Bible student equals dream scenario, space craft and Bible prediction. I have always found that any dream can be interpreted with diametrically opposite meanings, so I gave up studying my own dreams. A common opinion of the ancient Hebrew scholars was that dreams are so much nonsense or wish fulfillment. Let's say if the last days come and get over with, we will be happy, assuming not sent to hell. The exception is dreams sent by God. If God will not give you the interpretation, you might as well consign it to the devil. Lots of people are calling 2015 a bad year. Lots of people have been calling every year a bad year since bad dreams started. I have no answer for your dream. Pray for an interpretation or drop it.
  • Bible Prophecy - God's Agenda & Your Part In It on March 17, 2015

    Your suppositions on the prophecies of Daniel and related prophecies may have some merit. Your timelines might work and the 5th beast would conform to Islam. As for your analysis of the fall of man, a few points: Both statements made by Satan were lies. Recall that man was made in the image and likeness of God from the start. He did not achieve this by eating a piece of fruit, nor Eve. Ethics are innate or do not exist. The reasons for ethics are beyond definition, not being definite but eternal, spiritual and infinite. The facts of a crime are definite, not the determination that murder is a crime. God was indeed being sarcastic when he said that man was now as one of us. Note the 'one of us' comment as well. The scoundrel believes that he creates right and wrong just by a whim or by experience, distinct from eternal truth. Eve already knew right from wrong. She thought she was being cheated by God and took remedial action. As it was, the serpent was the cheat. Giving her husband tainted goods to eat was the true crime. By the way, when God laughs to scorn the the gentile nations in Psalms, this is sarcasm. There are some other cases of irony and sarcasm as well. It is true, that salvation is serious business. Of course men pay a heavy price for folly, and Adam, Eve and progeny have certainly paid a price. Ethics and wisdom must go together or they fall separately. A final point, you need to correct some spelling and grammatical errors at some point in the future.