Kel's Story sets the stage well in a unique world. It does a good job of providing some background on the geography, political structure, and magical abilities in the Refuge World, while moving the story along following the main character. It's a good mix of action and explanation that keeps it interesting. Overall, a decent preliminary prologue chapter.
I'm wondering a bit at the fickle nature of Kel's fellow knights, and whether that's normal. I know that some of it is explained in the third story, but even with that taken into account, they seemed a bit whimsical.
Really enjoyable continuation of Kel's Story. I really liked the intelligence that both major characters (and some minor ones) exhibit, even in the middle of pitched battle. I can see some echos of the Brutal Harry persona in Kel, but he is certainly his own person. This chapter was very enjoyable.
A bit of an angsty chapter, but I can see it being necessary for the story progression. The introspection was understandable, if a bit illogical, and it answered some of the questions brought up in the earlier chapters.
This one really raised a lot more questions than it answered. We only get a hint of how it is the Storm Belt that divides the northern lands from the southern, and leaves us wondering just what causes their vast differences.
It was an interesting idea to see, and implemented well. You seemed to show a logical interaction between Kel and his "rescuers", and avoided any convenient (read: cheap) plot devices to ease the interaction. The language barrier and culture shock seems realistic and makes for an interesting read.
Awesome story. There were moments when I actually had to stop reading so I could clap and cheer. The story really drew me in. There was fencing, fighting, torture, revenge, beasts, monsters, chases, escapes, sex, and paranormal oddities.
Some of the plot twists were getting a little predictable near the end, but it probably didn't help that I read the description of the sequel first. By and large, though, I loved this book. I'm hoping to see the sequel on Smashwords soon.
I have been a long-time reader of the webcomic, and was fairly surprised by the size of the world that has been established for it. Everything ties together. Real-world events and histories are used to mesh into a cohesive story that leaves me questioning whether it could become reality at some point. Then I read this story.
There's just so much more world-exploration that can be done in a written story than can reasonably be shown in a comic. Digital Divide expands on the comic and brings it even more to life by pulling out more people's perspectives and putting them in real-world perspective. I took a while to get around to reading the story, but now I am sad that I took so long.
There were a couple of scenes or events that were a bit predictable from a plot perspective, but that's fairly inevitable when reading a mystery, especially when the villain has a penchant for the dramatic. Overall, this was an awesome story, and I'm looking forward to the sequels.