The Star Gazer's Curse
on July 13, 2011
It's a short story that has a point, but I'm not really sure it's a romantic point. The formatting is a bit odd, with some paragraphs that were BOLD, and others which were normal.
The characters are mysterious - mostly because they're met very quickly and then the story is over.
Could definitely use some fine-tuning and a good proof reading before being published. Otherwise, the word that best describes the story for me is "cute." It was very cute.