Two and a Half Weeks
on Oct. 01, 2014
Good! Humorous! Great character and situation development. Want more...
Reef Line and The Gulf
on Oct. 01, 2014
Good writing, but lacked satisfactory relationship/character definition/explanation. Needs more "flesh" to be a good short story...left me un-satisfied on a few levels....
Flood
on Oct. 01, 2014
This fragmented story left me puzzled. Couldn't make sense of it.....situation, setting, and characters were just too under-developed for me.
Ebb and Flow
on Oct. 01, 2014
Good writing: descriptive, logical. Characters have depth, situation/setting well defined.