I think overall it has potential. Some timing issues, it reads rough. Also even the best southerner knows to never use y'all when referencing one person. Little things like that leads to overall distraction with the book.
I think the book has promise but could not finish it due to writing style. No paragraphs, quotes, sentence structure was off at times. Made it difficult to read. Clean it up some and I will be happy to give it another try.
In love with the series! Downloading book three today. Writing is very good, plots flow well, and good transitions from book to book. I like how characters from first book are brought forward to this one in some way, as i liked them so much.
I really wanted to like this book as much as the first two. Even though the writing was good, I found the story a little lacking. I did not care about the characters as much. Even the small part of the story from book 2 seemed more. Still a good book but not as great as the ford two
This was my first book from the author, and i thought it was very well done. The story, while short, still was good at developing characters, moving the plot on a good pace, and had the happy ending feeling you want with a romance. I would like to read more from the author.
I know this said part one, but I would probably say it was more like chapter 1. It started to set up the story, but not really enough for me to say if I liked it or catch enough of my interest to say I would look for the next installment