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Member Since: Aug. 28, 2013

Judi Carol

Bottoms Up on Aug. 28, 2013

Interesting premise, but the story drags. Revision with a "show, don't tell" approach would help the reader connect with the character and the setting with more engagement. I'd be interested in reading the story again after a rewrite.