By Kelly Kenyon
Published: June 27, 2012.
(4.67 from 3 reviews)
An eighteen year old boy has died much too young. He is stuck in an invisible realm between Heaven and Earth. He watches his friends and family grieve,specifically a young, guilt-stricken girl who he had a brief sexual encounter with only two weeks before the horrific car accident that claimed his life. This is a short-short story of roughly 1,600 words.
on June 28, 2012
Thankfully this story was free. It moved at a pace that was way too fast. If the author would have spent a little more time on it, revised and re-wrote some things, made it longer, added more desciption, then it would have had slight potential. It wasn't God-awful, but it wasn't good either.
Very well written! It is a short-short story, but very imaginative and entertaining. Every kid has that fear of something being under their bed. It is an over-used tale, but this story definately has its own unique spin making it one of a kind!