M. Pars

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Smashwords book reviews by M. Pars

  • No Place Like Amestraton on Feb. 15, 2013

    This is one of the most boring stories I have ever read. I think many details could have been omitted. The characters are not fully developed and come across as quite stupid, for want of a better word. I read it through hoping it would finally develop into an exciting, entertaining story, but was sorely disappointed. Needs to be reworked.
  • Anaxiunara (One Brief Eternity) on Feb. 28, 2013

    Marvelous! Truly a gifted storyteller. Thank you for the spiritual, philosophical and emotional (not forgetting fantastical) journey. I hope that you write more about Anna and everyone else.
  • The Light & Shadow Trilogy on April 18, 2013

    Wonderful! I lived through the characters - felt their joys, sorrows and victories. This trilogy left me wanting to share more of Catwin and Miriel's lives. I hope you will write about them again.
  • The Unsuspecting Mage: The Morcyth Saga Book One on Aug. 28, 2013

    I have to agree with my fellow reviewers - the book lacks tension and the present tense is very difficult to follow. I think that the use of the present tense takes away any depth, rendering the story flat. I certainly would not pay money to read the remaining volumes.
  • From Across the Clouded Range on Oct. 23, 2013

    Truly epic - I could not put my iPad down. Characters are well-balanced and believable. I cannot wait for the next book. It has been a long time since I have read such a captivating story. Hats off to you! Please keep writing. Talent such as yours must be shared with the world.
  • A Thread in the Tangle on Nov. 08, 2013
    (no rating)
    How can anyone review your book if all you allow is Epub? Look at other writers - they offer many options.
  • Scarlet Quest on Jan. 14, 2014

    I just started reading this story and could not continue after a few pages because of spelling and grammar errors in almost every sentence. It promises to be a good tale, but needs to be thoroughly edited.
  • Double Life on Jan. 26, 2014

    Was this written by a couple of teenagers? Overuse of adjectives - out of context. Too many spelling and grammatical errors. I have read about 1/3 of the story and cannot continue. Maybe this book will appeal to the young adult and teen readers, but it certainly will not help to improve their language skills.
  • Journal of a Living Key - Coven on Feb. 15, 2014

    Needs major editing. I have read up to page 7 and cannot continue due to numerous spelling errors. For example: a skirt is pleated, not pleaded; one eavesdrops, not ease drops. Please rework.
  • The Well of Fates on Feb. 26, 2014

    Fabulous! Another great storyteller is born. I cannot wait for the next book(s). Please hurry!!
  • Illiom, Daughter of Prophecy on April 22, 2014

    A very well-written tale with believable characters. You are a gifted story teller and I cannot wait for the adventure to continue. Well done!
  • Storm of Prophecy, Book I: Dark Awakening on May 06, 2014

    A good attempt. The characters need to be fine tuned and the story needs to flow more smoothly. I felt myself becoming irritated with the utter stupidity of most characters - perhaps the author attempted to portray them as complacent, but they unfortunately did not come across as such.
  • Bound by a Dragon on May 08, 2014

    A sweet romance. The characters are believable and although the story follows the standard "romance" formula, it is very enjoyable and easy to read. I cannot wait to read more about Keira, Aaron and Anna.
  • The Church of the Wood on May 14, 2014

    Truly enchanting! The characters are real and I lived the tale with them. Keep the faery stiries coming.
  • The Orphan and the Shadow Walker: The Awakening on June 25, 2014

    Excellent! I cannot wait for more. Please hurry with the continuation. You are a gifted storyteller - a true bard. Thank you.
  • A Woman Warrior Born on July 01, 2014

    In one word, excellent! I cannot wait for more of Breea. One of the few books that I just cannot put down. Bravo!!
  • Blood Gift Part One on July 07, 2014
    (no rating)
    Will you please offer this book in other forms - PDF, read online, etc? That would most certainly assure (perhaps positive) reviews.
  • Tempting Fate on July 13, 2014

    Outstanding! I could not put this book down, and now that I've reached the end, I want more. I do hope that Saira and friends will find their way into my library once (or twice) more. Thank you for spinning a fine tale.
  • Crimson Oath on July 15, 2014

    Try again in a few years. Had I known of the particular sexual angle beforehand, I would not have read the book. Please declare all content and repost your book, especially as some parents might not want their teens to read about these things.
  • Slayer on July 19, 2014
    (no rating)
    Groan! I could not get past page 17. Please go back to school and try to pass your English courses - all of them.
  • Birth of Blackheart on July 22, 2014

    Surrealism taken a bit far. This book is a difficult read. I forced myself through 2/3 of it, but cannot continue. Too many holes and shifts.
  • Dream Wakers on Sep. 10, 2014

    Wow, what a roller coaster of a ride! I cannot wait for more. You are a gifted storyteller and I look forward to reading more of your work.