I enjoyed this story and I thought it was very well written. Usually when I go to read something, it takes a few pages for me to start to get into it, but I was hooked within the first few paragraphs. It was captivating and the characterisation was very well done.
Mysterio the Great
on Feb. 26, 2013
I thought the plot of 'Mysterio the Great' was nicely concocted and there were some laughable moments.
Although, I felt the style of the writing seemed a litte immature and I think it could benefit from a few more re-edits as there were some errors which distracted me a little upon reading it.
This story reminded me of my own style of writing and humour so I very much enjoyed reading it.
Querky humour, entertaining and a fun read; the way stories should be in my opinion. Perhaps it is not up the alley of those more serious at heart, but if you just love stories that take you somewhere out of the ordinary, then I recommend 'Untitled: A Fairy Tale.'
It also seemed to be well edited and well written for the genre
Good for a quick read and very satisfying. I found myself relating to the main character in regards to his thoughts and feelings of the situation he was in and empathised with him accordingly which, I feel, is a good quality to have in a story. It was nicely written in the present tense (something which can be challenging to do I have found) and was well edited.