on Aug. 04, 2011
The plot is good. Dialogue is in character. Characterization is great. Mani protagonist is likable.
Flip side: Needs to be edited for correct word, example barley used instead of barely, crawled instead of clawed.
While the author needs to edit for the above and for comma usage, I tried to read the book all the way through in one sitting. Unfortunately life interfered. Read the book in spite of the problems. This is a writer to keep an eye on.