The Prospect Of A Sweet Career
by Yelaina Bevfior
Price: Free! 710 words.
Published on July 26, 2011. Fiction.
I was challenged to write a story containing the words "requital" and "chocolatier". This is the result.
Location: United States
Member Since: Feb. 08, 2011
Yelaina Bevfior
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Smashwords book reviews by Yelaina Bevfior
- Accounts: An 'Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom' Story
on Feb. 19, 2011
This short really wets your appetite for the rest of the story.
- The Silver Collar
on May 02, 2012
Great little fairytale-type story.
- The Hitch
on May 03, 2012
Cute, but I didn't get it.
- The Queen's Blade VI - Lord Protector
on May 15, 2012
*****
- The Queen's Blade V - Master of the Dance
on May 15, 2012
*****
- The Cahuac Cycle
on May 15, 2012
****
- A Stretch of Time
on May 15, 2012
****
- The Gauntlet Thrown
on May 15, 2012
****
- Accident Man
on May 15, 2012
****
- Teacher's Folly
on May 17, 2012
This is a very enjoyable story. I really got sucked into the situation; even caught myself holding my breath.
- Take Me Home
on May 17, 2012
***
- Longest Night
on May 17, 2012
Interesting, but I think it needed more explanation of why the characters felt the way they did about each other.
- Mother Earth
on May 18, 2012
Very Anticlimactic ending.
- Pirate or Prisoner? A Day in the Life...
on May 18, 2012
I felt that too much time was spent getting to the point of the story.
- The Deathly Vortex: A Short Story
on May 18, 2012
I didn't get it.
- The Cloaked Man: Life of an Antagonist: A Short Story
on May 18, 2012
***