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Member Since: April 18, 2012
LastRedwitch
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- Shadow Games
on May 05, 2012
Good story with a reasonable plot. Consider an unbiased editor and alow red ink. Extended descriptions of a beautiful day or place, pages of copulation details just because you can, and very sparse character details drop this reader out of the story into scanning to find the interesting story again. Check out C J Cherry for some of the best character development and handling of sensuality and sexual tension in the genra.