Location: United Kingdom
Member Since:
June 21, 2011
David Green
Biography
I run ( with my business partner) MKP Entertainment.
We cover the whole of the UK with family and childrens entertainment.
Including Birthday Parties, Fetes, Weddings and Corporate.
I love reading and try to read as often as I can in between my work and other interests...travelling, cinema ( avid movie buff)and games.
We cover the whole of the UK with family and childrens entertainment.
Including Birthday Parties, Fetes, Weddings and Corporate.
I love reading and try to read as often as I can in between my work and other interests...travelling, cinema ( avid movie buff)and games.
Where to find David Green online
Smashwords book reviews by David Green
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Fall Leaves and the Black Dragon
on Aug. 05, 2011
(no rating)
This is a very good paranormal themed story about a young man haunted by an event in his past and decides to confront his terrors. The story is told from the view point of "Willy" or Liam (as he later calls himself) and the characters involved are easy to get involved with and get attached to. Something is happening to Liam and his best friend, Kenny ( who goes on the journey with him) all the way through, which makes the reader want to carry on reading and the final relevation finishes the story well. Although there are ghosts, fiery dragons and general creepiness happening regularly throughout the story it does not grab you and have you hiding behind the sofa so even those who are a bit squeemish about this type of story will enjoy it. It's a nice change for an author to tie all the ends up and actually finish a story instead of leaving the reader wondering "yeah but !!! " However ; The first 30% or so of the story is pretty much written well but after this it's as if the author suddenly loses his ability to write or only bothered to get the first 30% of the book proof read before publishing. The mistakes after the first 30% are glaring at you off the page with either whole missing words or words the wrong way around in a sentence as well as numerous general typo errors. This makes the book difficult to read and it's only the power of the story that got me through to the end. If the author could get this book properly beta read or proof read it would be much better received by the reader. However i still believe that this is an enjoyable story so it's definately worth a look at. I have only marked as three stars due to the amount of errors. Once these are corrected then i would give this 4 stars.
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Fall Leaves and the Black Dragon
on Aug. 05, 2011
Update on my review below : Erik Gustafson has informed me that it looks like i got one of the older versions of this book that had not had a proper read through before publication. So like i mentioned in my review below once the errors have been corrected ( which hopefully they will have been in the new draft) i would give this a 4 star rating as the story is enjoyable.