Intriguing and a little rough around the edges, but I liked the cold on one hand, insane on the other, half-vampire and half whatever that was, protagonist. I think it should have been a little longer, I'm not sure 100%, exactly what happened in the end, as it appears that this is a part, of a bigger story. Good effort.
Overall I liked it. It has its flaws but these days you can't find any kind of decent poetry around. Good solid verses, nice ideas and most-times successful execution. Could have been bigger, but considering what I have read, its an excellent collection of poems. Five stars effort.