To be honest, I found the dialogue to be unrealistic. I felt you did a very good job of creating interest in the rest of the series, though.https://www.smashwords.com/static/img/star.pnghttps://www.smashwords.com/static/img/star.pnghttps://www.smashwords.com/static/img/star.png
'The Love Machine' is a very well-written novella.
Because the story did not take place in a 'futuristic' setting I found it difficult to believe that two people could make such a complex machine. Though the writing was so strong that the implausibility of the AI didn't concern me very much.