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Smashwords book reviews by sandy

  • Endless Magic on April 09, 2012

    Even as a little old lady, I enjoyed reading this series. The characters were well-defined and I enjoyed the fact that they all matured and learned to live with the consequences of their actions. Or inactions. The theme - justice - is an ongoing real subject and the timing and phasing in of events seemed real. Some small complaints. Spelling, choice of verbs and adjectives and grammar needed editing. Some choices for Eden's body language were off-putting. Nobody over ten (I think) crosses their arms or stomps their feet when they're angry. I'm thinking it's mostly a hands-on-hips-and-head-and-upper-body-forward-and-yelling-thing. Other than that, I'll miss Eden and Kiran's adventures.