Enjoyable story! Fun and lovable characters. I was happy to see the message of the "golden rule" being used here. My nephew thought this was a great kids story and we both really enjoyed reading it! Waiting for the sequel to see what Chase does next.
What a fun story! I enjoyed the description of nature surroundings and could imagine the drive to the cabin! It was actually quite relaxing! The story itself was fun and playful, very imaginative! The "magic" is hilarious and the ending is great for sending a meaningful message to young ones. Well done Liz! Our children need more stories that represent the positive values found in your characters.
For reviewer Martina, if you had gone just one page further where the fun starts and the plot really unfolds, you will appreciate the first four pages much more! Honestly, it's a short story (not to mention, it was free!) I think you might have short changed the author with your rating - just my opinion! I personally did not get any sense of that much word repetition.