Dear Ms. Williams:
Your story was one of the best written, more compelling tales I have read in decades. Despite a difficult premise, (or may be because of it), the entire story held together from start to finish. THANK YOU. Please keep trying your hand at writing fiction. I will try to take a look at your other works as well. Please accept these very sincere 5 stars from a long-time prolific reader. Thanks to Smashwords for giving me the opportunity to "stumble" across Ms. Williams story.
A very short story; more like a synopsis. This story was too short to allow for a complete tale. I would like to see the author expand on all the concepts and publish it again as the premise made me feel as if there was a good imagination at work here.
A lovely and sweet romantic tale! Well-written and I liked the character development and pace of the story. There was just enough heat to make it hot! There were a few typos or grammatical errors but the author has already corrected and re-posted. I would like to have seen a few more scenes to further develop the relationship instead of having the story end because I liked it that much! Thank you Aria Grace for a very nice read. (Please note that I received this story free in exchange for a review.)
Wonderfully romantic full-length story. HOT and sweet and funny and sad and HOT!! Very well-written with few grammatical errors and typos to distract from the action. Thank you Finn Marlowe for an absolutely great read!!
A great little story! I laughed and I cried and then I laughed again! I loved the characters and the way the authoress brought it all together to a complete tale. FYI: I bought this story on Smashwords. In my opinion Aria Grace is an authoress to watch! Thank you again to Smashwords for giving readers the opportunity to connect with stories and their writers in such a great format.
Rough and raunchy and a great start to a new series! Just enough details to set the scene without giving away the whole show. Left me looking forward to the next one! Please note: Francis Ashe offered this story for free in January 2013 via his newsletter, however I believe it is well worth the price to purchase.
A decent enough read from an inexperienced writer. The story premise is a good one. The story obviously needs to be properly edited and beta-read, however, there are few grammar/tense/spelling errors to distract. If you are looking for hot and raunchy you will not find it in this tale. I think that f this writer will get some help and continue to write, eventually good things will come.