What a wonderful mix of descriptive, observational poetry and introspective turmoil as the focus of this brief story rolls over thoughts in a mind tormented by perpetual analysis, juggling with cause and effect, action and consequence, while still maintaining a safety net of absolute distraction in an amazing location. A well written ambiguous piece that challenges the reader's inagination intellectually at the same time as fulfilling it aesthetically with a complete atmospheric portrait.
The writer has examined every detail, movement, look and feeling with microscopic vigilance in this unusual short story. Two male lovers, two agendas crossing paths on different levels. There is a sense of ending, of mourning a relationship but no tangible or verbal conclusion that explains the situation completely. The setting, as with all the stories from this author, is beuatifully presented.