I found the lapses into 3 person narrative were a bit jarring and disrupted the flow of the story and the ending was very abrupt. Beyond that, however, I enjoyed the story and, like the other reviewers, I am looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Wow! A great story and an amazing calibre of work from a teen author. My only critique to to watch your editing (ie: Lars instead of Lara) and to keep track of details like how many babies your characters are pregnant with. With a bit of time and development, I expect we will see great things from this author.
A well thought out and written story with some unique twists! I really enjoyed this book and I have already downloaded the rest of the series. Having said that, however, I found the narrative to lack differentiation of personality between the different perspectives. I found it difficult at times to determine whose perspective I was reading.